Polish Your Presentation & Own the Room in 90 Minutes
90-minute intensive presentation coaching for professionals with high-stakes talks in 2-4 weeks
You have a board meeting, investor pitch, or all-hands presentation coming up.
Your slides are cluttered. Your message rambles. The clock is ticking.
And you're running out of time to figure this out alone.
Deck Detox is your emergency presentation coaching session.
In 90 minutes, we'll detox your slides, restructure your message, script your tough questions, and get you confident for game day.
Deck Detox is a 90-minute intensive presentation coaching session designed for professionals who have an important talk coming up and need expert eyes on their deck.
Note: This isn't a full communication overhaul. This is targeted intervention for one specific presentation.
What you get:
60-minute live session: Deck review, message restructuring, delivery coaching
30-minute polish session: Final feedback after you practice
Day-of strategies: Vocal warm-up, mental prep, handling nerves
This service is for:
Board meetings
Investor pitches
All-hands presentations
Conference keynotes
Client proposals
You'll walk away with:
A polished, structured presentation (slides refined, message clear)
A recording you're proud of (practice run you can review)
Confidence on game day (you'll know exactly what to say and how to say it)
You Have a Big Presentation and You're Not Ready
Sound familiar?
Your Slides Are a Mess:
40 slides for a 15-minute talk
Too much detail, not enough clarity
No clear through-line or story
Your Message Doesn't Land:
You've rehearsed 10 times and it still feels scattered
You bury the lead with 5 minutes of context
You know what you want to say but don't know how to structure it
You're Nervous About Tough Questions:
You know they'll ask about [that thing] and you don't have a good answer
You're worried about pushback or disagreement
You freeze when put on the spot
The Clock Is Ticking:
Your presentation is in 2 weeks (or less)
You don't have time to take a full course
You can't afford to mess this up
If you show up unprepared:
❌ You'll ramble and lose your audience in the first 3 minutes
❌ You'll read your slides word-for-word because you don't trust yourself
❌ You'll get a tough question and freeze or fumble
The stakes are real:
Lost credibility with senior leaders
Missed opportunity for promotion or project approval
Damaged reputation ("They're not ready for the next level")
You don't have time to figure this out alone.
You need someone who's seen 100+ presentations tell you: "Here's what's wrong. Here's how to fix it. Here's what to say."
That's Deck Detox.
Before Deck Detox
Your Current Reality:
40 slides with text walls and cluttered data
Opening that takes 5 minutes to get to the point
No clear structure (just a sequence of loosely related topics)
Transitions that don't connect ("Um, so, next slide...")
Closing that fizzles out ("Any questions?")
Nervous about being asked [specific tough question]
You've rehearsed 10 times and still don't feel ready
After Deck Detox
Your New Reality:
15 slides with clear visuals and minimal text
Opening that hooks in 30 seconds (problem → your solution → what they'll learn)
Clear structure using PREP, ACTION, or SHIFT framework
Smooth transitions ("Here's why that matters..." "This leads us to...")
Strong closing with clear call-to-action ("Here's what I'm asking for")
STEP 1: Pre-Session Prep (You do this 48 hours before our session)
What you send me:
1. Your Current Slide Deck
PowerPoint, Google Slides, Keynote any format works
If slides aren't finalized yet, send me an outline or rough draft
Include speaker notes if you have them
2. Context About Your Presentation
Who's in the room? (Board members? Investors? Your team? C-suite?)
What's the goal? (Get approval? Share an update? Inspire action? Convince them?)
What's your biggest fear? (Tough questions? Going blank? Being boring?)
3. A Voice Recording of Your Current Version
Record on your phone (voice memo is fine)
Don't edit yourself; I need to hear where you stumble, ramble, or get stuck
This shows me your natural delivery style and where you lose the thread
Why this matters: I need to see your slides AND hear your delivery to diagnose the gaps. Most presentation problems aren't just slide design they're message structure and delivery confidence.
What you send to: [Email address will be revealed after]
Deadline: 48 hours before our scheduled session
STEP 2: Deck Detox Session (60 minutes, live via Google Meet)
We jump on a call and I help you:
🎯 Detox Your Slides (20 minutes)
We open your deck and I tell you:
What to cut: "Slide 8, 14, 22 delete them. They don't serve your goal."
What to restructure: "Your opening is buried on slide 5. Move it to slide 2."
What to visualize: "This table should be a chart. This paragraph should be an image."
Goal: Cut your slide count by 30-50%. Clarify your visual message.
Example transformation:
Before: 40 slides, text-heavy, no clear narrative
After: 18 slides, visual-first, clear story arc
🎯 Detox Your Delivery (20 minutes)
We apply the right communication framework to your message:
If you need to persuade (investor pitch, project approval): → Use PREP Framework
Point: State your recommendation up front
Reason: Why this matters
Evidence: Prove it with data
Point: Restate and call to action
If you need to tell a story (case study, project retrospective): → Use SHIFT Method
Situation: Set the scene
Hurdle: Introduce the problem
Insight: What you learned
Feeling: Move them with emotions
Transformation: The result
Goal: Give your presentation a backbone. No more "I'm just going through slides." You have a structure.
🎯 Script Your Key Moments (10 minutes)
We script the parts that matter most:
Opening Hook (First 30 seconds):
Grab attention immediately
State the problem or opportunity
Preview what they'll learn
Example:
"We're leaving $2M on the table. Here's why and here's how we fix it in 90 days."
Transition Statements (Between sections):
Connect your points smoothly
Use bridge phrases
Example:
"Now that you've seen the problem, let me show you the solution..."
Closing Call-to-Action (Last 30 seconds):
Summarize your key point
State what you want them to do
End with confidence
Example:
"Here's the bottom line: We need to act now. I'm asking for approval to move forward. Let's discuss next steps."
Goal: You'll know exactly what to say at the moments that matter most.
What you walk away with:
A restructured deck (less clutter, more clarity)
A framework for delivery (PREP or SHIFT)
Scripted key moments (opening, transitions, closing)
Curveball responses (no more fear of Q&A)
STEP 3: Practice & Record (Your homework, 2-3 days)
What you do after our session:
1. Revise Your Deck
Make the changes we discussed (cut slides, simplify text, restructure)
Apply the framework (PREP, ACTION, or SHIFT)
Script your key moments (opening, transitions, closing)
2. Rehearse Your Full Presentation
Deliver it start to finish
Use the new structure
Practice your vocal variety (pauses, emphasis, tone)
Time yourself (are you over? under?)
3. Record Yourself
Voice recording or video (video is better but voice works)
Deliver the full presentation as if it's game day
Don't stop if you mess up keep going
Send me the recording
Why this matters: This is where the real work happens. The session gives you the roadmap. The practice makes it muscle memory.
What you send to: [Email address]
Deadline: 24 hours before our polish session
STEP 4: Final Polish Session (30 minutes, live via Google Meet)
We review your recording together. I give you:
✅ Specific Feedback on Pacing, Clarity, and Vocal Presence
✅ Tweaks to Tighten Weak Spots
✅ Confidence-Building Strategies for Day-Of
What this session feels like:
Encouraging. I tell you what's working (more than you think).
Precise. I pinpoint exactly what needs tweaking.
Confidence-building. You'll leave thinking "I'm ready."
What you walk away with:
A polished presentation you're proud of
Specific tweaks to implement before game day
Day-of strategies (vocal warm-up, mental prep, curveball handling)
Confidence that you're going to nail it
✅ 60-Minute Deck Detox Session (Live via Google Meet)
Slide review and restructuring
Message framework (PREP, and SHIFT)
Scripted key moments (opening, transitions, closing)
Curveball prep (scripted responses to tough questions)
✅ 30-Minute Final Polish Session (Live via Google Meet)
Review your practice recording together
Specific feedback on pacing, clarity, vocal variety
Tweaks to tighten weak spots
✅ Pre-Session Slide Review (Asynchronous)
I review your deck and recording before our live session
Come to the call with a diagnosis already done
We use our 60 minutes for coaching, not discovery
✅ Email Support Between Sessions
Quick questions? Email me.
"Should I cut this slide?" → Yes or no.
"Does this transition work?" → Here's a better one.
🎁 Bonus #1: 5-Minute Vocal Warm-Up Audio ($47 value)
Professional vocal warm-up routine:
Breathing exercises (calm your nerves)
Vocal resonance exercises (deepen your voice)
Articulation drills (eliminate mumbling)
Energy activation (turn nerves into presence)
Use this 15 minutes before you present.
🎁 Bonus #2: Framework Cheat Sheet ($50 value)
Quick-reference guide for the framework we used:
PREP Framework (for persuasion)
SHIFT Method (for storytelling)
Keep this for every future presentation.
🎁 Bonus #3: "Handling Tough Questions" Guide ($50 value)
5 techniques to stay composed under pressure:
The Clarifying Question
The Bridge
The Redirect
The Pause
The Follow-Up
Plus: Example scripts for each technique.
$437 CAD
ROI:
If this presentation gets you project approval: Millions in budget unlocked
If this presentation gets you promoted: $10K-$50K+ raise
If this presentation lands the investor: Company-defining moment
If this presentation protects your reputation: Priceless